And Then There Were None

When I was fixing my final draft to fix all the mistakes I had made, one of the things I had to fix were my punctuational errors. Though those type of things were not going to be graded on this essay I still corrected them for my final draft. Another thing I did to my final, was fix the organization of my paragraphs and what went in which paragraph. I think that the best form of support for me when it came to writing this essay, was the peer review checklist because it's coming from another classmates point of view who has the same task as me, and knows exactly what needs to be done which leads right into why I don't think that an adult checking it could be as helpful. They don't exactly know everything we know and I feel like it coming from another student could be more helpful. Although, since my dad is a Language Arts teacher sometimes it is even more helpful having him check things too. I think if we keep continuing to to peer edits and adult edits it will help me improve my writing, especially getting feedback from different people.  I think I have room to become a better writer in the area of topic sentences, and coming up with a theme but being able to write it correctly. A goal I want to achieve is to be able to do that by the end of the year 100% correctly.